Welcome to Millzoetry Onlife. I'm trying to get into the writing thing and would like to know what everyone thinks. I'm hoping to be able to post something new for the blog every Monday. I'm no pro at this, but I do have a passion for wanting to get better. Hopefully you enjoy what you see and I can keep you coming back for more.
Gone are the days of silent HI’s and winks for I love you / No longer will we gaze into each other’s eyes, no more, those days are through / Farewell to the smile on your face, from the joy that I would bring / Adios to the silly songs about our love, that we would always sing / So long to the cold nights I’d endure, where you’d be by my side / No more will you carry the healing aid, to fix my broken pride / Here are the days of loud goodbyes and fingers for how you feel / To stay is the hate in your eyes, that I pray is not for real / Hello to the angry scowl, that I now know all too well / Hola to all the hateful words we share, no longer will we L-O-L / Welcome to all the warm nights, where we are filled with rage / Always will we remain apart, never again the same page / Memories of love are here to stay, some good yet some are bad / But nothing can ever erase, all the beautiful moments we had / The scars and wounds of this love battle, will show forever on my heart / But this is the game we chose to play, we knew the rules from the start.
Bro...I'm so in love with this poem! AWESOME, AWESOME, and did I mention AWESOME!!! LOVE IT!
ReplyDeleteI reeeaallly love this poem. Expresses the "highs" of loving ...the peace and comfort it brings along with the simple pleasures and intimacy that you can only share with one person and also shows the reality of choice and that they dont always last forever and u learn from those experiences and keep the memories. ...LOVE THIS. You painted an awesome picture.
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